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General Forums => Comments for Staff and Comments from Staff => Topic started by: billnotgatez on February 24, 2006, 07:38:55 PM
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Quote from Borek
"General rule is: we will not help you hurt yourself."
You might want to change it to the below statement or something to that effect.
"General rule is: we will not help you hurt someone, including yourself."
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Borek has less words though.
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I know that brevity is the soul of wit, but I shoot for accuracy.
:)
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I know that brevity is the soul of wit, but I shoot for accuracy.
You have the makings of a member of congress. LOL.
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"We will not help you hurt anyone."
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that is more better
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Don't you mean 'more gooder'? ;)
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I stick to 'yourself'. Even if it is not as broad, it is more directed to the reader. Thus its perception is better (one of the first marketing rules tells you to use 'you' in ads, it is one of the most 'positive' words). That's a 'practical psychology' :)
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"We will not help you hurt anyone, including yourself."
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"We will not help you hurt anyone, including you."
That way we appear more altruistic.
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he he == more gooder is more better
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The shorter slogan, the better. Trust me - I was manipulating readers for ten years working as a journalist ;)